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Post by Dixie - dixsterling on Mar 16, 2015 17:58:42 GMT -5
1. Maybe omit the word herbs. Anyone who doesn't know that rosemary is an herb is not likely to be your target for this! 2. Isn't saying salve so much the dreaded keyword stuffing (or do I have that all wrong)?
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Post by Dixie - dixsterling on Mar 16, 2015 18:06:44 GMT -5
I think I'd try starting with "Cell Phone Case" and then the descriptive stuff. If I was after a phone case, that's what I'd start tying in search. The egg hair clip could stand adding one more photograph - with more contrast between the clip and the background. It kind of fades out of sight now? Kawaii Sweet Lolita Carousel Horse Necklace -- how about "Kawaii Necklace: Sweet Lolita Carousel Horse" then the color?
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Post by Samson on Mar 16, 2015 18:44:47 GMT -5
I think I'd try starting with "Cell Phone Case" and then the descriptive stuff. If I was after a phone case, that's what I'd start tying in search. The egg hair clip could stand adding one more photograph - with more contrast between the clip and the background. It kind of fades out of sight now? Kawaii Sweet Lolita Carousel Horse Necklace -- how about "Kawaii Necklace: Sweet Lolita Carousel Horse" then the color? I changed it around to "Decoden Cell Phone Case Custom Kawaii and Creepy Cute Resin Phone Case", but I don't like that... I think. It feels overstuffed to me. I really want to keep "decoden" and "resin"somewhere in the title. Decoden is the style of cases I do, and I sorta need resin so people can hopefully right away notice that it is not the 'whip cream' sort of decoden most people do. You're right about the egg clips. I had to redo all the photos at one point and I told myself I was going to fix that and get more angles. Good thing I was reminded. You make a good point there. If you see a lot of my listings they usually don't mention if they are a necklace/hair clip/ect until right near the end. Thank you for the suggestions!
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Post by janeisgreen on Mar 16, 2015 18:57:56 GMT -5
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Post by patchworkgal on Mar 16, 2015 23:37:03 GMT -5
The first one seems ok to me, even using both rosemary and herbs, because either might be used in searches. But the other two both seem rather repetitive.
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Post by patchworkgal on Mar 16, 2015 23:46:55 GMT -5
I realize the phone cases are made-to-order so the photos don't necessarily show the exact item the customer is getting. But if I was going to order one, I would want to see be able to see the photos more clearly. The way you have it now I can't see the sample photographs through the text. Maybe the font needs to be a little smaller. Or maybe you could add more photos of sample cases to fill up the remaining photo slots.
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Post by janeisgreen on Mar 17, 2015 6:15:51 GMT -5
I realize the phone cases are made-to-order so the photos don't necessarily show the exact item the customer is getting. But if I was going to order one, I would want to see be able to see the photos more clearly. The way you have it now I can't see the sample photographs through the text. Maybe the font needs to be a little smaller. Or maybe you could add more photos of sample cases to fill up the remaining photo slots. Ditto on Samson's comment. When I looked at this listing, I didn't realize that the photo had four different cases! Could you do five different photos of example cases instead? (I don't even have a cell phone, so you can take my comments with a grain of salt.) For the title, what about something like "Custom Phone Cases, Resin Decoden in Your Design Choice" (I also had to look up "decoden" and "kawaii" – shows you how old-fashioned I am!).
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Post by janeisgreen on Mar 17, 2015 6:24:04 GMT -5
The first one seems ok to me, even using both rosemary and herbs, because either might be used in searches. But the other two both seem rather repetitive. 1) I'd only change the order to "Organic Rosemary Herb in Glass Jar for DIY Skin & Hair Care" – I don't think "spice" is necessary for describing the jar?? (Is it okay to use an ampersand in the title?) 2) "Organic Healing Calendula Skin Salve, 1.5 oz" 3) Great the way it is, except you don't need "for kids" at the end as it already says it's for kids?
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Post by janeisgreen on Mar 17, 2015 6:54:17 GMT -5
I started working on my titles last year when I read the first SEO challenge by Katie. And then I slacked off. So, I still have ones like these, where I was using "names" for items: www.etsy.com/listing/54038320/ Autumn Day Glass Beaded Bracelet in burnt orange, cobalt, and russet <-- Still working on a title for this one. www.etsy.com/listing/21232023/ Tranquility turquoise beaded necklace with ceramic pendant {edited} Turquoise chip and nugget beaded necklace with ceramic pendantwww.etsy.com/listing/53998511/ Green Caterpillar lampwork beaded Bracelet {edited} Sage Green and black lampwork beaded braceletFor the first one? Colorful Glass Bead Bracelet in burnt orange, cobalt and russet I'd avoid seasonal unless you always remember to change it when the seasons change. I don't mind using the word "autumn" as that does describe the bracelet's colours. "Autumn Leaves" comes up near the top when you use the search "autumn" on Etsy, and jewelry is right up there. Jewelry is such a difficult category! I think the second one is fine with your edits, and the third, would changing the order work better? "Lampword Beaded Bracelet in Sage Green and Black"
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Post by janeisgreen on Mar 17, 2015 7:07:44 GMT -5
1 & 2: What about using words such as "elegant," "stylish" and "sophisticated" to differentiate your beautiful pendants? I'm not a jewelry person, but if I were searching for something, I would use those descriptive words in a search. 3. I can understand why this one is difficult. What about something like "Unisex Sterling Jewelry, Bold Silver Pendant with Chain"?
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